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  1. These are the first few pages introducing Katherine Briçonnet, the first Chenonceau woman Chenonceau, 1512 The rounded tip of Chenonceau’s tower pierced through the morning mist, and Katherine Briçonnet caught her breath. Everything she had been working toward, all her quiet ambitions, culminated in this moment. The journey from Tours had taken nearly half a day along the River Cher, but her anticipation had been waiting much longer—weeks, perhaps months. While Thomas was away in Italy, attending the king on his tiresome effort to dominate the disjointed peninsula, Katherine had busied herself in the minutiae of estate affairs. Livestock ledgers, supplies reports, and her children had offered distraction from the greater, gnawing worry: Would the builders respect her voice? Would they follow the designs she dared share with them, unsigned, unacknowledged, but precise? Or had they dismissed them, deferring reflexively to her absent husband? Now, her mule’s hooves crunched along the gravel path, shaded by ancient chestnuts that framed her view. She sat straighter in the saddle, urging her mount ahead of her entourage. The trees parted, and the southwest tower revealed itself fully. She braced herself, one hand instinctively rising to her heart, and then a smile formed on her lips. The once-stern fortress of the Marques family rising above the riverbank had been transformed. Where arrow slits once pirced the stone, elegant windows were now framed in creamy limestone. The tower’s medieval roof had given way to a soaring conic spire that rose like a prayer. Intricate dormers graced the upper rooms, their white stone gleaming against slate shingles still dark from the morning dew. “It’s perfect,” she breathed, just above a whisper. Then, louder, with impressible joy: “It’s perfect!” Spurring her mule forward, she dismounted with uncharacteristic haste, silk skirts hiked into her hands. She took the stone steps two at a time, hardly noticing the Marques’ coat of arms above the old water well. Her attention was fixed on the doorway—her doorway. Around it, a curled garland of stone adorned with seashells, birds, vines, flowers, and, most delightfully, mermaids. Not the grotesque sailors’ sirens of popular imagination, but graceful, willowy creatures, delicate and serene. Even though she had never been to the sea, she had insisted on them. They represented the mysteries of the feminine as a source of life. Without women, there would be nothing, she thought. “Madame Briçonnet?” came a voice, rough and familiar. She turned to find a wiry man emerging from the shadows of the portico. His face was sunworn, his hair graying beneath a dusted cap, but his eyes twinkled with pride. “Monsieur Dubois!” she exclaimed, taking his hands warmly. “You’ve done it. You’ve brought my vision to life—more beautifully than I ever dared to hope.” “You have the eye of an Italian, Madame,” he said with a wink. “A true connoisseur of beauty. And a fair patron, too. You kept us well fed and better paid.” She laughed, her heart full. His loyalty had not come cheaply, and she thanked the heavens for her husband’s familial wealth, but the results spoke for themselves. Now only one obstacle remained: her husband. When Thomas returned from Italy, he would expect to see the château—his design, his command, his triumph. How would he react to find her imprint on every stone? It had all begun innocently enough, when Thomas was appointed General Finances to the King in 1490, some twenty years earlier. “My position requires a noble estate,” he stated matter-of-factly one evening over dinner in their grand, wood-paneled dining room. Their hôtel particular in Tours, though elegant, had suited Thomas the mayor—but it did not befit a nobleman. “And I believe I have found the perfect property,” he added, motioning for the steward to refill his goblet with wine. “Fortified, historic. A proper statement.” Katherine’s mind whirled at the prospect of building a château from the ground up. “A château?” she exclaimed, perhaps a little too eagerly. He raised a brow. “You sound surprised.” She tempered her tone. “It’s only that … I have often dreamed of building such a place. Something beautiful. Lasting.” He frowned, slicing his roast with a bone-edged knife. “And what would you know about architecture?” he asked. She almost reminded him of her childhood in her father’s study, snuggled in his leather-bound armchair, losing herself in ancient texts on Greek philosophy, Roman history, and, above all, architecture. She had devoured sketches of classical temples and civic buildings, marveling at the miracles of arches and vaulting, critically evaluating how they might be reimagined in modern-day construction. Even as a child, roaming her family’s estate in touring, she had stacked stones into crude arches, puzzling over how each piece ft together to create something greater than itself. Of course it was silly of her to let her mind wander even a little bit. He would not be on board with a woman, much less his wife, sharing in the design process. She was determined, however, to view the property, to imagine what form an elegant château might take, so she changed tactics, squarely meeting his gaze. She held her tongue. “Nevertheless,” she said carefully, “I should like to see the property. To support you. And … to imagine what might become of it.” She saw it immediately—the brief, involuntary flicker in his expression, the way he stiffened at her words. Had he truly never noticed how closely she followed his discussions of the king’s fascination with the new Italian architectural styles, the same ones that he despised? “You? Why?” he asked. Because I see what you do not, she thought. Because while you marvel at power, I see the possibility for grace and beauty, an opportunity to build something livable and human-scale. But she said nothing. Instead, she leaned forward, softening her voice. She had learned early with him that a sugar fig tempts more than a bitter root. “Mon cheri,” she said sweetly, “your vision, your taste, your mastery of design, these are the very qualities that will make the château a marvel. But who better than I, your devoted wife, to admire and support your genius from the very beginning?” He hesitated. The silence stretched. He paused, his lips pressing into a thin line. For a moment, she thought he might refuse again. Then, with a scowl, he exhaled sharply. “Oh, very well,” he relented. “You may come tomorrow. But you must stay in the background. Do not interfere.” Katherine allowed herself a small, victorious smile. That, she could manage—for now. ** On that first trip to Chenonceau, she had ridden behind Thomas and his advisers—this time sidesaddle, to satisfy social norms. But she didn’t mind, as she stayed close enough to capture their words. “The estate belongs to the Marques family,” Thomas explained to his posse. “They’re knights from Auvergne who spared no expense in building a fortress in the 1430s. But their descendants have not managed their money well. While they are ensconced for now, they will find their financial demise. And I plan to be there, to pick up the pieces.” His voice was full of scorn. They approached the estate from the opposite riverbank—Thomas did not want the residents to know they had company. The small group stopped amid a copse of tall, regal trees, the ones Katherine supposed had given the property its name: Chenonceau, a Celtic term for “oak forest near the water.” From a distance, she saw the crumbling fortress, square in shape with four round corner towers rising above, surrounded on three sides by a moat connecting to the adjacent River Cher. A separate mill, built directly over the river, stood on two giant pedestals ground into the riverbed for support. Jumping off his horse, Thomas strode along the riverbank, his pensive blue eyes scanning the blocky facade of the structure. “The site is strategic,” he said, measured. “We can easily renovate the existing frame.” Katherine stood near him, her long violet gown billowing in the soft currents of wind rolling off the River Cher. With a practiced hand, she pinned a hazelnut curl behind her ear, her silver clasp glinting in the sunlight. She hesitated briefly, choosing her words carefully: “As a nobleman,” she began, deliberate, “you deserve a structure that reflects your vision. What if we demolished the fortress entirely and built something new—over the river, where the mill stands?” There. She had said it. The first spark of the vision she longed to bring to life—a magnificent château that would endure for generations. Thomas turned to her, one eyebrow raised in incredulity. “No, really, cheri,” she said, keeping her words even, like the precise clucking tongue of their youngest daughter Chloe’s harpsichord tutor, Madame Sevigny. “That’s the only way to make it remarkable. A château on the river, not beside it. The mill’s foundations are perfect for such a structure. And, let’s be honest—modernizing that old fortress will only result in an awkward blend of eras. It won’t command admiration. It will look like we’ve tried to update a block of stone.” “It will work,” he said, folding his arms and slivering his eyes. “It can be done my way. But first, we need to acquire the property.” He didn’t sound confident, but Katherine let it rest for now. Little did they know then, as they stood there by the River Cher, it would take sixteen long years to turn their conflicting visions into reality.
  2. 1: Story Statement Three remarkable women, each entwined with the history of the Château de Chenonceau, navigate the constraints of their patriarchal eras to shape a legacy that defies time. Centuries later, a modern-day narrator, in search of her own voice, discovers their stories—drawing strength and inspiration to forge a lasting mark of her own. #2: Antagonistic Forces Each woman is confronted with social, political, and cultural structures that seek to silence or control them. But also: Beatrice: her mother Katherine: her husband Diane: Anne (king’s mistress), Cathérine de Médici Cathérine: Diane the mistress #3: Breakout Titles The Ladies of Chenonceau The Women Who Loved Chenonceau One Château, Three Women #4: Comparables The Serpent and the Pearl by Kate Quinn The Rivals of Versailles by Sallie Christie #5: Core Wound and Primary Conflicts A woman whose life has fallen apart returns to a château she once visited in her youth, seeking solace in the wisdom of the remarkable women who lived there—each of whom defied the constraints of patriarchy in her own way. Note: My story centers on a modern-day narrator whose journey is interwoven with the lives of three women from the past. Through their stories, she uncovers profound lessons and shared experiences. While the central thread follows the narrator’s present-day perspective, each woman’s narrative reveals a common struggle—the fight to have their voices heard in a world that silences them, not only through the people around them, but through the enduring weight of patriarchal systems, both historical and still present today. #6: Other Matters of Conflict I have sketched out the conflicts and hypothetical scenarios for each of the three women in the story, as well as the main narrator. Beatrice (modern day): Shy and hesitant to voice her opinions, Beatrice drifts through life, bending to the desires of others while neglecting her own. She struggles to assert her needs, often finding herself drawn to narcissistic men who diminish her sense of self. Deep down, she longs to be heard, to break free from this cycle, and to step into the fullest version of herself. Core Conflict: A profound lack of self-confidence and inability to find her own voice. Hypothetical scenario: Beatrice falls deeply in love with Mark during college, convinced they are building a future together—until he abruptly accepts a job in Taiwan without consulting her (trigger). He offers a lukewarm invitation for her to join him, and she follows after him, only to eventually realize he has no real intention of committing to their relationship (reaction). Kathérine (late Middle Ages): Passionate about architecture, Kathérine dreams of building a lasting legacy through her designs for her and her family. Yet, her ambitions are stifled by her husband, who not only offers her no support for her own dreams but also takes the credit for the work she has done. Core conflict: Betrayal and lack of support from her husband. Hypothetical scenario: After her husband’s death, Kathérine hears whispers at court that he had been embezzling funds to sustain their extravagant lifestyle—a stark contrast to his claims of inherited wealth when they were betrothed. The truth strikes her: he had never opposed her dream of building a magnificent château out of principle, but out of financial deceit (trigger). He allowed her to pursue it only as long as it bolstered his own image, never once considering the legacy she longed to create for herself or the foundation she hoped to build for their family. Now, with the court poised to seize the château as collateral for his debts, she must act swiftly—and legally—to reclaim what is rightfully hers (reaction). Diane de Poitiers (French Renaissance): Privileged by wealth and status yet starved for power, Diane knows she cannot claim influence on her own. To secure her place in the political arena, she becomes the young king’s mistress, skillfully manipulating court affairs from behind the scenes. With beauty and charm as her weapons, she carves out the life she desires—including possession of the château. Core conflict: Navigating and subverting the patriarchal system. Hypothetical scenario: Henri is set to be married, and Diane knows she must move quickly to secure her influence (trigger). She concedes that Cathérine de’ Médici is a suitable match—if only because, as the daughter of a mere merchant, she poses little threat. This union will allow Diane to maintain her hold on power. She must convince Henri to concur, knowing he is falling in love with her, and she him (reaction). Cathérine de Médici (French Renaissance): Trapped in a loveless marriage with Henri II, Cathérine’s unreciprocated devotion festers into a need for control, manifesting in her ruthless, vindictive nature. Unable to win his love, she wields power in other ways—using the château as both a weapon and a symbol of her influence. Core conflict: The pain of being unloved. Hypothetical scenario: The 14-year-old duchess is brought to France to marry the dauphin, and she falls madly in love when she sees him for the first time, a handsome, brooding teenager. But he has eyes for someone else (trigger). She responds by taking her wrath out on the women of his desire (reaction). #7: Setting The château de Chenonceau in the Loire Valley is more than just a backdrop—it’s a character in its own right, as five different women across centuries build it and leave their marks, shaping its history as much as it shapes theirs. The first woman lays its foundation and the next two expand and refine it. In the present, Beatrice arrives, drawn to their echoes, seeking wisdom from their stories as she arrives to find her own voice. Kathérine: the founder—the courage to begin anew; taking the first step toward change using perseverance and dedication. Diane: the visionary—ability to claim space and wield power using beauty and love. Cathérine: the survivor—transforms the chateau into a center of influence using power and force.
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