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  1. Blocks from the bay, in Colored Town, ole Banneker crowed double-time, then strutted beneath the porch of an abandoned shotgun shack. Seconds later, the sun reached the two-story Dade County pine house painted white with green shutters piercing an upstairs bedroom window protected by curtains made from lace tablecloths, displaying their intimacy with holiday gravy. The sun and the humidity made the pink bedroom glow, made the webs, spun overnight by ambitious artisans in the ceiling’s corners, glisten. In front of the dresser, an oscillating fan perched in a wooden chair held vigil. The fan provided a scant layer of cool air hovering between the ceiling and the top bunk bed where Sukie Wilson’s sixteen-year-old body lay. Between the lone mosquito nipping her ears, the heat, and her recurring dreams, Sukie spent most of the night searching for cool, dry spots on the floral cotton sheets. At first, she lay at the bed’s head until sweat soaked that spot. Then she caterpillared her long, lean body to the bed’s bottom. When sweat claimed that spot, she swung her legs over the bed’s side rail, rested her head somewhere in the bed’s middle, and tried to catch wisps from the fan’s squeaky attempts to cool the room. But the fan barely circulated the humid air drifting in from the jalousie windows upward. Now at dawn, which should’ve brought relief, she competed with the sun for remnants of cool air. She found none. “Shoot. Wish Mama Ruth would turn on the air,” Sukie grumbled, half asleep, knowing only out-of-town company warranted air conditioning. Patting the sweat-soaked sheet beneath her butt, she sucked her teeth and drifted into another dream. One so real, she smelled the strong stench of pee, felt the warm trickle beneath her butt like when she was little. Shifting on the sheets, Sukie muttered out loud as she dreamt, “Ciana, you done peed again.” “What?” Ciana rubbed her eyes. “You too old to be pissing in the bed. Ain’t your mama taught you nothing?” She elbowed her six-year-old cousin out of the bed and onto the bedroom floor. “Didn’t mean it,” Ciana whined. “The Boogie Man inside the bathroom.” “Humph! Trifling heifer. Ugly as you is, you scare the Boogie Man ‘way,” Sukie hissed, her voice low and unforgiving. “And be quiet.” The warning came too late. A door screeched. Moonlight flowed through the upstairs hallway. A narrow shadow emerged, and the soles of worn bedroom slippers shuffled down the hallway like the Ghost of Christmas Past. Shivers claimed Sukie’s body. Squeezing her eyes, she used her hand to cover Ciana’s mouth and prayed the shadow away. It almost worked. “Ouch! Heathen heifer!” Sukie grabbed her hand, inspecting Ciana’s bite. Armed with a towel flung across her shoulder, the shadow flicked on the light. “Ciana, don’t you fret none. Sukie don’t mean what she say” Their grandmama, Mama Ruth, hoisted Ciana from the floor. “Change your nightie, ‘n go sleep on the settee.” She reached for the box of Arm & Hammer baking soda on the windowsill tucked behind the curtains. “Ain’t no need to pour none. Still gonna smell like pee in the morning.” Sukie nursed her bite with her lips, then kicked the pee-soaked summer quilt to the floor. Washday was Wednesday: four days away. Mama Ruth would never hang bed clothes outside before washday, broadcasting a pee-pot lived in her house. Mama Ruth patted the baking soda into a thick paste on the sheet and spread the towel over it. “Whatcha say?” She glared at Sukie. “You know it’s an accident. Chile got a weak bladder, that’s all.” Her voice barely above a whisper, she picked up Ciana’s wet nightie and panties. Sukie sucked her teeth. “Nah-huh. She just too lazy to take her narrow, red behind to the bathroom. She always be dranking after dinner. ‘specially Coca-Cola.” Rolling her eyes, Sukie went to the dresser. She exchanged her daddy’s wet Fruit of the Loom T-shirt for a dry one, dropped it onto the floor, and muttered, “You always be taking her side like she helpless. She ‘bout as helpless as a newborn rattler. Meaner than a polecat in heat. Stingier than a virgin on prom night.” “What’s that? Speak up. Don’t wanna mistake back-talkin’ for talkin’ ‘bout me behind my back. ‘n what you know ‘bout virgins?” Sukie jumped. Dang, she thought, that woman can hear a rat piss on cotton and see trouble coming a week away. “Go to sleep. It’ll be fore day in the mornin directly. ‘n if you keep rollin ‘em eyes, they’s gonna roll out ya head.” She picked up Sukie’s wet T-shirt, then planted a kiss on her forehead. “‘n ‘pologize.” “Yes ma’am.” But she wasn’t about to apologize. Not tonight. Not even on Judgment
  2. Pre-event Assignment 1, Story Statement

    Sukie learns that that the continuity of family traditions have value and are an integral part of who she is.

    Pre-Event Assignment 2,

    Ciana, the antagonist’s main goal is to be accepted by her family, to heal the wounds of being dropped off by her mother to live with her grandparents and cousins. Ciana struggles to understand why and how she doesn’t fit in her family structure. Although she knows she is loved, she constantly competes with her cousin Sukie for her grandparents’ affection and in doing so, she tries to be the opposite of Sukie, who is well-behaved and a model student. Ciana’s goal is get her mother’s attention and love while she struggles to understand why she can’t live with her mother.

    Pre-Event Assignment 3 – Breakout Title

    1.       One More Mango Season

    2.       Families are not all Blood Born

    3.       Under a Tropical Sun

    Pre-Event Assignment 4 – Comparables

    The first comparable is “Their Eyes are Watching God”, by Zora Neale Hurston, because it is set in a small Florida town and brings to life the fabric of the community, which is made up of different black people who are flawed and yet likeable. The second comparable is “Ugly Ways” by Tina McElroy Ansa. This novel is also set in a small town and depicts the rivalry between siblings. Both of these comparable have rich dialogues and they characters have diverse backgrounds that are integral parts of the novels.

    Pre-Event Assignment 5 – Logline

    After being raised privileged and the object of her grandparents’ affection, Sukie must now share the limelight with her cousin Ciana after she is dropped off by her mother to live with Sukie’s grandparents.

    Pre-Event Assignment 6 – Conflict

    Sukie, the protagonist, inner conflict involves being raised as a responsible child and yet having to do the right thing when it comes to watching over her cousin Ciana because Ciana was left by her mother. Sukie doesn’t understand why this makes Ciana so special because Sukie’s mother died when she was a young girl. Sukie resents having to share her grandparents with Sukie and has to navigate this resentment with her grandparents’ expectation that she must look after her cousin.

    Pre-Event Final Assignment – Setting

    The novel takes place is an all-black neighborhood in Coconut Grove, which is bordered by white neighborhoods. The flora and fauna and accessibility to the bay gives the neighborhood its character as boys ride their bicycles to the bay to go fishing, black women and men make their livings working in white folks mansions, and school children look forward to attending the all black high school, until integration uproots their lives. ,

  3. Assignment 1, Story Statement Sukie learns that that the continuity of family traditions have value and are an integral part of who she is.
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