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Laura Legan

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    I live in Gates Mills, Ohio with my husband and daughter, who is currently at Miami University, and our rambunctious dog Harley Quinn.

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  1. I am thankful I splurged on the handcuffs with the pink fur. Max will unlock me eventually, it's just a matter of how long he is going to be unconscious. The fur on my wrists makes it a bit more tolerable. I glare at Max, sprawled on the wood floor to my left, halfway out of the bathroom in his boxers, wasted and out cold. I am furious with Max’s use of recreational substances; that had all but disappeared until recently. Stress from the impending wedding must have been the catalyst, but it is no excuse. Had I thought about that, I would never have agreed to this game tonight. He seemed well enough at the time, though. I glance around the bedroom trying to calm down. There is his hiking gear on the floor, my books and magazines stacked up like little towers along the far wall, our bedroom chair with clothes piled high, all giving our place a lived-in look, a code for messy. My ceiling could use a coat of paint, the walls, too. It doesn’t matter, though, because in just a few weeks, I’ll be Mrs. Maxwell O’Byrne, and our house will be ready to move into any day now. My fingers feel as if they are going numb. Can I lose my fingers this way? How can I wear my wedding ring without fingers? Suddenly, I think I hear a knock. “You guys home?” That can only be Jack’s voice! An instant wave of relief washes over me as I yell. “Jack! Thank God!” I’m surprised he’s here at this hour, but who am I to question a miracle. “Kat? You okay in there?” “Yes and No.” My enthusiasm fades as I beg. “Please tell me you have a key to my apartment.” “Yeah, um, I think . . . it’s in my car. You want me to come in?” “Please! Go get your key and come in. I’m stuck.” “I’ll be right back. Sit tight!” Not a problem, I think to myself. I mentally picture Jack in his custom Italian suit flying down the stairs, climbing into his black BMW and finding my key, before running back up the steps to save me, like the perfect best friend he is. Then, I suddenly realize that Jack will see not only me in my lingerie, but Max will also be a complete embarrassment from where he’s passed out on the floor. Why does Jack have to be super successful and completely “together” all the time? He never gets flustered or loses his cool. It makes it so much more embarrassing for people like Max and me needing his help. If I am being completely honest with myself, it’s his devilish good looks that makes this so embarrassing. Ok, maybe it just doesn’t matter who finds you, it’s just looks bad. My thoughts are once again interrupted as I hear the lock click and the door creak open. Oh dear, this is really happening. “Kat, where are you?” His confident voice fills my apartment. “Jack Prescott!” I say, sounding like a schoolteacher. “I need you to stop for a second.” “What? Ok.” He is now right outside the door. “I’m in the bedroom. Don’t come in yet. I have to explain.” “Oh, no. What happened?” Poor guy sounds freaked. “Something happened this evening, and it didn’t go as planned.” I sigh. “Now you can come in.” The half-closed bedroom door slowly creaks open, and Jack walks in, larger than life in one of his beautiful midnight blue suits, a crisp light blue paisley tie, and his dark GQ hair. He lets out a big laugh. “Oh, good lord, Kat!” I attempt a wave with my little hand that is cuffed to my headboard. The punchline to all of this is either the matching fur-trimmed bra and undies that coordinate with the handcuffs, or the unconscious Max. In only a few seconds, Jack takes in the whole scene. “I don’t know who to help first.” “Really? Not the jackass on the floor is your answer.” I snap. Then I put on my best pout and say, “The keys should be in my nightstand.” “Let me get something to cover you up.” “You’ve seen me already, just unlock me. My hands are blue.” Jack sits beside me on the bed and opens my nightstand drawer. Crap. I wince when I realize what else is inside. “I um, don’t seem to be finding a set of keys.” He is now belly laughing. “Kat, how many sex toys can a girl have?” “Just. Find. The. Keys.” My voice is barely above a whisper. He glances sideways at me. “You know, if Max was better in bed, you wouldn’t need a drawer full of these.” He holds up something that is bright purple. “Wow, what does this do?” His blue eyes seem to be stuck wide open. I glare. “Use your imagination.” I pause. “Now, do you mind?” “Sorry, I’ll focus.” He quickly goes back to digging. “Found a key. It’s pink.” A slow mischievous smile spreads over his handsome face as he looks at me and then at the pink handcuffs. “This looks promising.” “His travel schedule can be very . . . ” I sigh as I say, “frustrating.” I now move my weight just a bit, as my ass has gone numb. “Plus, Max is very good in bed.” Jack glances over at him. “Yeah, he’s a real Casanova.” He leans over me, fiddling with the cuffs, as I take in his cologne, which I have always found very comforting, but right now is quite intoxicating. I feel a flutter begin to build in my stomach. Here it’s almost nine o’clock at night and he still looks and smells as crisp and clean as he does at eight A.M. “You know, Max seems to be falling back on his old habits from college.” Jack’s comment abruptly brings me back from my appreciation of him. “I’m aware of that.” I say as I glare up at him. “Of course, you are. My apologies.” He tries not to laugh. “Can you move your right wrist a bit? Oh, I have it now. Sorry to crowd you.” His tie dangles in my face and then it slides slowly across my stomach. I giggle and squirm as my full chest rubs against his ribs, oops. He glances down at me with a small chuckle and, then with a small smile, turns his attention back to the cuffs. He unlocks them and gently takes my wrists out. “You alright?” His blue eyes meet mine. “Yes, thank you.” I nod. “I think my ego is hurting the most.” I glance at my open drawer with the colorful gadgets askew, plus I just rubbed my chest on him. He smoothly closes the drawer. “Well.” He smiles at me with his kind eyes. “It’s just me, Kat.” He leans back and starts to move away when I see his eyes quickly glide the length of me. I sit up, slide off the bed and reach for my robe, which is unfortunately now in a heap on the floor on the other side of the small room. I stand up. Jack is looking at me, and his eyes then meet mine. I press my lips together to try to hide my smile as I slowly wrap my robe and tie it around my waist. We stand, looking at one another for a second or two. Jack suddenly looks uncomfortable. “I’ll get out of your way.” He walks over to Max and says, “Wake the fuck up.” He nudges him with his foot. Max does not budge. Jack sighs, “He’s impossible. How do you live like this?” “I’m not quite sure.” I gaze at Max, a 225-pound man passed out on the floor. He’s a pathetic sight all on his own, but next to Jack, the contrast makes it even more dramatic. Even if Max were standing upright, he still falls short of Jack. While Jack is polished and meticulous in every way, Max is all frayed edges and wrinkles. His fun-loving personality shines through, but some days I think his rugged and casual lifestyle should come with a liability waiver. My attention goes to Jack. I can’t help but wonder how life with a man like him would be. Jack would have dinner plans with reservations, trips that don’t include hiking, and never under any circumstances would he be out cold on the floor. “Thank you for saving me. Want to stay for a drink?” Better to act normal and not like he just watched me get dressed after I rubbed myself on him. “You are more than welcome.” His hands in his pockets now. “It’s not every day I’m invited to have a cocktail with a woman in fur undergarments, but I’ve intruded enough on date night.” “If you haven’t noticed, it’s more than over.” I said flatly. He stands still, watching me for a moment. My heart races. What is he thinking? That I’m an idiot for marrying Max? How I look in my underwear? He nods, turning away and then pivots around to face me again. “Oh, here’s the key. You might want to make a charm bracelet out of this or something if you’re going to continue to play with him.”
  2. Hello! I'm looking forward to meeting you all in person! Here is the breakdown of my Light Comedic Romantic Suspense. 1. STORY STATEMENT: Kat’s fight to be free from the Mafia and the FBI for a chance at love. 2. SKETCH THE ANTAGONIST: FBI agent Eric Shepard is the face of Kat’s troubles. His relentless hunt for her, front and center, eclipses mob boss Carlo Calabrese until the very end, only because Eric finds her first. Eric, raised by a single mom, and abandoned by a father he doesn’t remember, is consequently hardwired his sense of responsibility to provide for and protect his mom. Eric then graduates from the Ivy League and is established in his career when his mom is tragically murdered by her new boyfriend who then disappears. Eric leaves the lucrative world of money management, to track down the man who killed his mom and any others like him. His mom’s murder creates a crack within his moral compass. Eric’s stop-at-nothing attitude continues, but now includes breaking the rules if necessary. Katherine Sharpe isn’t the traditional target of FBI’s Most Wanted List. As a victim of her father’s bad decisions, Kat has the power to help Eric lure and catch Carlo, who is as bad as they come and smarter than most. 3. CREATE A BREAKOUT TITLE: See Kat Run 4. LIST TWO COMPARABLES: Finally Mine by Lucy Score and See Kat Run are written in similar tempo. Kat, the protagonist of See Kat Run, and Gloria, the protagonist of Finally Mine, both begin freshly out of long-term relationships. Scared of what the future will look like, the protagonists have to muster up the courage to move forward while managing all the challenges of the plot. As the stories progress, Kat and Gloria are forced to rebuild their self-identity, overcome past traumas, and learn to trust again as romance arises. In the end, they are both confident enough to choose their own path, refusing to let their pasts define them. By confronting their trauma head-on, Kat and Gloria are the heroes in their own stories and for the men they love. Bride or Die by Madison Score also has the feel of See Kat Run. Kat, protagonist of See Kat Run and Claire, protagonist of Bride or Die are both coping with broken engagements and dealing with the emotional aftermath, leaving them questioning their past and future. Struggling to balance personal and professional life, both protagonists are forced to confront their fears and trust their instincts to protect their lives, and new romantic relationship from an outside threat. Both stories test the protagonists’ resilience and determination to come out unharmed on the other side. Kat and Claire’s personal growth is what saves themselves in the end, along with the men they love. 5. WRITE A HOOK LINE: Just as Kat’s relationship with her best friend Jack turns to more, she has to escape the Mafia and the FBI who are holding her responsible for her father’s debt. 6. MULTI-LEVEL CONFLICT: PROTAGONIST INNER CONFLICT: Kat, as a young girl, was the sole survivor of a Mafia attack on her family. Her father’s enemies wanted to make an example of him, and his whole family would pay. Now after years of living under her guardian’s protection and receiving expert advice, which has kept her alive, but she is constantly looking over her shoulder. The men who tried to kill her and the FBI all want what her father stole which is now in Katherine’s possession. PROTAGONIST SECONDARY CONFLICT: Kat’s best friend and love interest Jack Prescott has a contentious relationship with his estranged father, John Prescott. John Prescott, unbeknownst to Jack, is Kat’s secret advisor since her parents’ tragic accident. He is the sole reason she’s still alive today. If Jack were to learn of the close, almost parental relationship she has with his own father, it could end their relationship entirely. 7. SET THE SCENE: See Kat Run starts in beautiful Chagrin Valley, Ohio. The quiet town of Chagrin is booming with tree-lined streets, century homes, community and old-fashioned Americana. The last place you’d think to find a nice woman on the FBI’s most wanted list and the ideal location for Kat to sustain her hidden in plain sight lifestyle. The setting then moves to their friend’s well-appointed lake house on Lake Chautauqua in upstate New York. A remote lake house on the edge of the water, a comforting and secluded retreat- until the group starts to question his mysterious accident. They come to realize it wasn’t an accident and this get away weekend isn’t a vacation at all.
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