Please see attached the first three chapters of my book.
The first chapter is the OPENING SCENE, which introduces the main character and his mission to a reader. The scene is structured such that whoever tries to guess what his mission actually is will be completely surprised by the second chapter. The first chapter does introduce the ANTAGONIST, without the reader even realizing it.
Second and third chapters create a PINCH POINT where the reader is up for an unexpected twist--no one could have guessed the identity of the main character or the nature of his mission. These are mostly dedicated to WORLD-BUILDING, through THE combination of DIALOGUE and the main hero's THOUGHTS.
First_3_Chapters.pdf
